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1.
For this first section, go through all your test screening feedback sheets and come up with an average grade for each aspect of MCCAT (the assessment objectives; what will ultimately determine your grade) based on these returns...
Media Language (A-E)
Conventions (A-E)
Creativity (A-E)
Attention to Detail (A-E)
Technical Proficiency (A-E)
2.
Then make a list of all the positive comments you received on your forms, ideally breaking them down into the different areas the class were asked to concentrate on...
(cinematography?)
(mise en scene?)
(lighting?)
(sound?)
(conventions? matching audience?)
(miscellaneous)
3.
Next, focus on any constructive criticism you received in the feedback, under the same headings as for the previous section...
(cinematography?)
(mise en scene?)
(lighting?)
(sound?)
(conventions? matching audience?)
(miscellaneous)
4.
Finally, and perhaps most importantly, write up the suggestions and ideas about how to improve and what else could be added...
What else would you (or the target audience) like to see in this production? (scenes? sequences?)
Suggestions for post-production/editing (music? voiceover? cutaways? montage? cross cutting? titles? slo-mo?)

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